Becalmed
wind that filled my sails
ebbs to a soft, weary breath
I’m becalmed, adrift
“Becalmed” — Haiku
31 Sunday May 2015
Posted in Blogging 101, Creative Writing, Journaling, Poetry, Writing 101, Writing 201: Poetry
Impromptu Promptlings
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What a soothing haiku. It’s strange – I wrote a haiku this evening, but it was rather a sad one…
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Have I seen it yet? Must go look!
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Oh that I could Haiku like you. 🙂 Really lovely!
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Come on now, GF. We both know you can write ANYTHING you put your mind to! 🙂
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I live for your haiku! You are a master!
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Ah, Lori! Come on. Anyone can write a haiku. You just gotta be able to count to 5 and 7! LOL But thank you. I’m glad you liked it. I did find out that Google images has no idea what a boat looks like when it’s becalmed. 😀
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Stillness! 🙂 It is a powerful place. Happy Sunday.
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I’m finding I can’t see it quite the way you do… I’m glad you liked it though, my friend.
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Very nice!
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