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If you were here and we were having a coke at Denny’s right now (it’s FAR too late for coffee!) at 10:54 p.m. I’d tell you it’s been one heck of a long day! I would extol the foresight of hotels to serve buffet breakfasts at no charge as it got us out of the hotel early and on the cheap!
If we were having a coke at Denny’s I’d tell you we spent the day exploring Baltimore’s inner harbor where we climbed all over the U.S.S. Constellation. It’s one of only two remaining Civil War sloop-of-war/corvette ships. (And you thought a corvette was only a car!) It was launched in 1864. I would also tell you I found out today its sister ship, the U.S.S. Constitution, that’s usually at the Maritime Museum in Boston Harbor, has now been dry-docked for three years for repairs. The Constellation is a beauty.
If we were having a coke at Denny’s now I’d tell you that we walked 6.6 miles today (14,741 steps). You’d be able to see that my face AND head got a lovely sunburn! And I’d for sure tell you my back was NOT happy with that abuse!
If we were having a coke at Denny’s I’d tell you that by the time we got back to my daughter’s and sent the “boys” (including 6-year-old Ethan and 4-year-old Liam) off on the metro to a Washington Nationals’ game, I could barely keep my eyes open. I’d tell you that I stayed at the house and watched 4-year-old Caleb while Stef and baby Lydia ran to the store, and I nearly fell asleep a dozen times reading to Caleb. And he’s SO smart he KNOWS if you miss a word!
If we were having a coke at Denny’s I’d tell you I was SO bloomin’ relieved to see Stef pull in the drive that I nearly fell asleep on the spot! Indeed, I was SO tired I had to forego my trip to the park with her and the kiddos and lie down for a nap — two hours. That’s the second day in a row I’ve felt like I’d been run over by a Mac truck! I’d tell you I was disappointed because I’d been looking forward to spending that time with my daughter.
If we were having a coke at Denny’s I’d tell you that I was VERY surprised when we got in the car tonight and pulled away from the house to go back to the hotel because our daughter — who doesn’t have a sentimental bone in her body — stood at the front door and waved as we honked pulled away…an old family tradition. I’d tell you it made me all teary because it means she’s realizing (I think) that she’s no longer invincible, and that makes me a little sad. (See Goodbye Ritual.)
If we were having a coke at Denny’s right now I’d tell you it’s WAY past my bedtime (11:28 — I type slowly on this!) and I’m half dead so I’m going to bed! I’d also tell you that I’m very thankful this trip has been stress-free so far (except for my occasional lapses in consciousness), and I’m sad we only have three more days with our grandkiddos. They change so fast between the times we get to see them.
So goodnight! See you around tomorrow, God willing!
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Writing 101 Day 10
Update your readers over a cup of coffee
No matter what type of blog you have, it’s sometimes necessary to post updates: from project news to personal messages about what’s going on in your life. One creative approach to an update post is a “virtual coffee date,” as seen on Kate Goes Global, which is like catching up with an old friend over a cup of coffee.
In her post, Kate begins each paragraph with If we were having coffee right now… and then adds a detail. You can share any details you’d like and include as many as you want, as long as you begin each with If we were having coffee right now… (or a variation of this phrase, as seen on Girl with the Red Hair).
It’s a simple idea, but offers a bit more structure to your post — and is a lot more fun. So today, write an update post in the form of a virtual coffee date.
If this post isn’t fitting for your blog, or just not your style, here’s your alternative: use a coffee shop as your inspiration.
- Set your poem or short story in a cafe.
- Go to your neighborhood spot with your laptop or notebook and free-write for 20 minutes, prompted by what you observe.
- Love or hate coffee? Tell us why.
If we were in Denny’s I’d think I was back in Dallas. I’d be drinking herbal tea, and be SO happy to share these moments with you. I’d tell you, (which I know you know) that traveling isn’t easy, and less so as we age. That you’re 2 hours later than you normally are, and you’re bed time is earlier than the ET clocks tell you. That you should simply enjoy the moments you have, and not worry about if you fall asleep, because, the most important thing is for you to take care of you, so you can enjoy every moment. And I’d tell you I miss you but I know you’ll be back soon, and we’re lucky to have this moment together, because with everything else, you’re still thinking of us and being here. {{{{Calen}}}}
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Thanks, “mom”… 😀 You’re such a sweetheart!
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If we were having a coke at Denny’s it probably was decades ago when I lived in Fells Point and it was just becoming a hip place to live. I would show you my favorite walk among the less well-known parts of the harbor–the parts that are still industrial areas with a cold beauty of their own. I would tell you I just became a grandmother a year ago and even though I’m a step-grandmother, I love my grandson just as much as if he were my flesh and blood. i would tell you what you already know when you said goodbye to your daughter and her family-that parting is such sweet sorrow. And I would tell you I loved your blog and the story of how you came to start it.
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Thank you so much. Sounds like we would have a lot to talk about! I’ll have to stop by your blog later!
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If we’re having a Coke (diet) at Denny’s, I’d tell you to enjoy being with Stef and the grand kids. Time with them is precious.But don’t wear yourself out. When we don’t live near our kids and grand kids it’s hard to leave them when we visit. Enjoy your time with them girl friend, make lots of memories and take lots of pictures! Luv Ya!
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I know EXACTLY what you’d say, girl! I’m learning how to be a grandma by watching you!
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If we had been havingcoke at Denny’s I’d have suggested that coke has far too much caffeine in it for that time of night!
How frustrating for you, wanting to savour every moment, but feeling so tired. I think that apart from all of the walking, heightened emotion tires us more as we get older.
And sometimes time just passes too quickly.
Enjoy the rest of your holiday… xx
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It is disconcerting. I never mean to sleep that long. I’ve been hoping they find it has something to do with that Adrenal Fatigue Syndrome they’re checking on.
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They’re checking on it? I thought it was something that the medical profession didn’t recognise…
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Don’t think they wanted me running off to a naturopath. She is looking at the adrenal glands now. Doubt they’ll find anything of any consequences.
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I hope you’re wrong, and something can be done to help you. x
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…and if I was sharing that ‘diet Coke’…actually I don’t drink soda anymore,,,so decaf coffee for me….I’d have listened and could totally relate to everything you said!!!! I felt it C….every time I visit, the leaving doesn’t get any easier, nor is it any easier watching them pull away when they leave me…….enjoy every moment and make those memories!! ❤️
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Her standing there waving was just such a surprise. I think it made me feel older somehow — if that’s possible! 😀
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We have to refuel a bit more often than in our youth…a truth for all of us. Don’t feel like you are the exception. I walked a few miles less than you did yesterday and I was beat–as was my friend. We ended up cancelling our plans to do a 2 hour rehearsal for the Thriller performance we plan to take part in in a little over a month. http://judydykstrabrown.com/2015/09/19/to-the-moon-alice/
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