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I have SO enjoyed reading the responses to this week’s Sandbox Writing Challenge: What is your idea of perfection? I’m feeling positively enlightened!
I didn’t think for one minute when I read that prompt from the book that there was such a thing as perfection. And yet I found myself speculating about it simply because I felt I knew what perfection was NOT! How can one know what perfection is not if they don’t know what it is? Does that make any sense?
It’s sort of like how you can tell a lot about something from the absence of it. I once saw a beautiful portrait of no one at an art gallery in Salt Lake. It has stayed with me ever since. The name of it was Absent Portrait. In the picture there was a white-washed wooden slat chair set in front of an open window with gingham curtains billowing in the breeze. On the chair was a book with wildflowers lying on it. A white linen dress with eyelet lace and a pair of silky hosiery were draped over the back of the chair. On one of the knobs on the chair back was a straw summer hat ringed with a wide pink satin ribbon. On the floor next to the chair was a pair of black, high-topped, button boots.
That’s it. The painting was beautifully done, but the implication was that the person who was supposed to be painted hadn’t shown up for the picture. Even so, I could tell a lot about that person. To begin with, it was a she. I would have said she was well off financially because of the linen and lace dress which screamed Southern Belle. The fine leather shoes dated the portrait, as did the straw hat, which also spoke of the season. I could also assume she loved flowers. Not just ANY flowers, but WILDFLOWERS! That made her feel somewhat adventurous to me as did the title of the book which was in plain view: The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
So even though I had no idea what this (likely) young woman or girl looked like, I felt I knew a lot about her. Just like I feel I know a lot about imperfection. Which still leaves me in the dark about perfection. My analogy obviously broke down.
After thinking about it for the last 24 hours or so I finally came up with two things I think are perfect: sunset and sunrise. With each new sunset we know our world has survived another day of abuse. With each new sunrise we know we have a chance to start again. So as long as there are sunsets and sunrises, I believe our beautiful planet (despite it’s many scars) is still functioning as perfectly as it did when God set it in motion. May it always be perfectly so.
(Picture Credit: sun’s trajectory — www.worldaccordingtomaggie.com; quote — www.truthfollower.com)
☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️ you know I love so much my sunrises….
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You know, I cannot imagine living in Alaska where one day sort of blurs into another because there is no sunrise or sunset most of the year. I think my body would be so out of whack and so would my mind if I had to live in that kind of environment.
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Hi 🙂 Apologies again for being late with my response – I’m such a slowcoach and perfection really did have me stumped. I really enjoyed your question of how can you know what something is not unless you know what it is? I could see that painting you described so vividly too that I feel like I have actually seen it. Your closing paragraph of sunsets and sunrises surely was a perfect way to end a great post in response to the prompt 🙂
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You know, you’re not the first one that said that about the painting. Perhaps I should try to recreate it somehow. Maybe we could have a one-time challenge where people just try to create something similar?
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Hey that’s a fantastic idea – I actually imagined it first as an actual installation but re-reading realised no it’s a painting – but that visual image you created with your description was so very strong! I’d love an arty type challenge – maybe any visual or textual use of your description as a prompt? Wonder who else would be in and how long we’d all need…? a week…or longer…? Maybe you reveal yours after the deadline and see how close we get? is that how you mean? some types of course would be most different if text based and not visual but it opens up for participation of writing type rather than arty or mixed type… I dunno – but I’d definitely have a try whatever you decide… getting an early response in for Sandbox this wweek too I hope to save you the extra linking admin 🙂
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It really is an interesting suggestion. I will give it some thought and post about it later this week…
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☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️ you know I love my sunrises….
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Yes I DO know. Now if I could just learn to tell east from west (without my mountains around, I mean) I’d know if it was sunrises or sunsets I like the best! 😀
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I think that the painting of the items, the way you describe it, sounds like perfection. I SO want to see that painting. Who is the artist? The sense of someone, as you said, does not always need the individual to know certain things about them.
Your description, in fact, was quite perfect for something which totally drew me in. 🙂
I also really like how you put you know what perfection is not, thus, it allows you to be able to construct what it might be, for you. And you found it in the idea of the Sunrise and the Sunset! What a beautiful and exquisite telling.
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I have searched the internet for that painting. I can only surmise it was by a local artist. I fell in love with it. If someone was into photography, they could do a book of absent portraits with each one depicting a different kind of person. Maybe ask you to guess who it might be about, then put the answers at the end of the book. They would have to be well-known people. That would be fun if you had the resources to do it.
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Yes, if the painting isn’t found anywhere online, chances are it’s a local artist. What museum was it in? They might have the painter’s name. I can look them up and see if they have more info about him. If s/he has a site, then it’s likely they might have a print of it.
You’re right. That would make a fun photography book, and puzzle game! I LOVE puzzles, which you know. 🙂
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Oh gosh. It had to have been 25 years ago and it was a showing at the old Salt Palace which has long since been torn down. So no clue…
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Oh, wow, it felt like you’d seen it recently, probably because while we’re playing in the sandbox of yester year, it’s in the present. 🙂
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Well I think it just made a huge impact on me. I loved it that much! ❤
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