For someone who told me once it was okay to take a comment and turn it into a poem…
A Fine Wine
As I sit back now
and ponder the last year
of knowing you,
I see how you have mellowed,
like a fine wine.
The questions,
the pilgrimage for truth,
are still there,
but the tang that is tasted
on the back of the tongue
is apt to be not as sharp
and pungent now.
You have dusted off
the fine powder of time
that has settled
on your outsides
as the wine
and the wisdom
has aged within.
And even though
the bottle of your life
has tipped and the wine,
uncorked so it can breathe,
has spilt leaving you feeling
depleted and lacking,
it is the emptying of yourself,
the draining of the bottle,
that has allowed the light to get in,
to illumine the crevices of your soul
so the questions, still to be answered,
at least now are no longer seen
through that glass quite so darkly.
And as Spirit like the wind
rushes in to fill you,
you are relaxing into
the ebb and flow of your life.
And in that current
you have carried
many of us along with you,
for which I give thanks
as I drink in your sage words.
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Please visit Plato’s blog at Plato’s Groove. I know he would enjoy your company.
It is the journey that is taken, and the heart that is shaken which seeds the wind with words, as you have here. Brave beautiful Soul which you are, walks the trails of transformation, and serves a banquet that is ripe and sweet, and divine.
Sublime!
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The writing is on the blog… it’s undeniable that you actually DO. However, it can be our secret, if you wish. 🙂
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Yes, keep it secret. Keep it safe. I don’t want to embarrass myself unnecessarily!
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Reblogged this on A Whispered Wind and commented:
Bravo! Now that is some vivid wine imagery!
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If it came across that way then I am relieved. I wasn’t even sure it made sense! 🙂 Thank you so much, Lori, for the reblog…
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You are most welcome for the reblog and sorry, I forgot to disable the comments on my blog… which I have done so now. It would help if you would put his blog’s name on your post instead of just linking the title of the poem to him. Until I went back and looked, I didn’t even realize that it was a link to someone else’s blog. Just a thought… it would help generate more traffic to his site. Cheers!
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I will do that this minute! Thank you for the suggestion! 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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Good and great poetry, I believe, is so difficult to create. So much of it is just a warble of words that just don’t make complete thoughts. YOU, on the other hand, create poetry that is understandable. The thought structure is there and you compose a beautiful set of words. This, my dear, is great poetry! Thank you for a lovely gift!
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You know, it really was actually a comment I left on his blog. 🙂 I’ve gotten away from trying to write poetry since I bombed Writing 201: Poetry so bad! LOL But that comment just came out in one long breath. He is a great inspiration. I’m glad it made sense, Catherine. Thanks.
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If you think you’ve failed at poetry, perhaps you need to rethink it… THAT up THERE is some gorgeous writing, regardless if it was a comment in prose or now transformed into poetry. My goodness woman… you should be writing poetry!
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LOL! I can tell you and I need to have a LONG discussion over coffee about poetry! Do you write poetry? I’d love to see some on your blog if you do.
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That was bold and beautiful and an unfolding of a new petal. You too have grown in courage and wisdom. I would not say you have changed but rather have allowed the flower of your soul to open. The struggles of last season has sent down new roots and strengthened the stem and leaves of you. This year I think will be a time that the flower of you fully opens to the light. Thank you sweet friend.
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This year has been a strange dance we have both done with our souls. I wonder what will happen this year, if the music itself will change…
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Do you remember the name of the one I wrote for you about you clapping? I was thinking it might go well with the wine and help complete the story. I would like it by that one.
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The gift. That which you did is more profound than anything I have. It was about the beginning of my flowering and your role in it. In that you have honored me in this way in public I think it only fair these good folks know the rest of the story. 😉
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“The Gift?” I will always remember. Shall I repost it? (I have your picture back finally. That guy worked miracles with your blog!)
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You have me all teary this morning, you darn nerf herder! ❤
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A real man of depth.
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With a hard-fought-for knowledge of himself and life around him. And on his journey he has turned into a true Bard. I think he referred to some of what he has been doing with the music and his words as Bardic-Jazz (or some such thing). It’s very appropriate! 🙂
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Cool. Thanks for sharing him with us!
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You know I love this ❤️🍷🍷
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I think I always experience his words and wisdom as new wine that can’t be put in old wine skins. 😀 (I wonder what he’d think about that? LOL) I know they’ve been a balm this year for me…
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What a beautiful tribute to a soulful, gentle man
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Yes. He has a teacher’s soul. He knows life’s not about just imparting knowledge and truth to others; it’s also about learning to know yourself better. Everyone who has gotten to know him on here is much richer for it.
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