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I made a note in the comment section on the post on “Hiraeth” to have a look at Jane’s X post for the A to Z Challenge, but I think what she says in this poem speaks to where that feeling of hiraeth could possibly come from. It’s a different perspective, but I sure can see how we might perceive our loss of control at the center of our world a “homesickness” of sort. The idea fascinates me!
born,
as we all are,
with an un-formed intellect,
I am unable to recollect the early days
of my xenization on this complex planet.
At first, In my simplicity, I thought
that I was all, and all was me;
but after a while
I began to
separate
the
particles;
to understand
my mother was herself,
close by, but beyond my borders,
as was my teddy bear, and even my vest.
the trees above me were more distant,
and the sky was far away.
gradually all
the pieces
that
I
had
perceived
as mere extensions of myself
took on their individual characteristics,
became recognised as foreign bodies,
and I was left feeling –
as we all do –
lonely.
absorbed
in a sense of isolation,
it is easy to forget that
this world we inhabit
is xenodochial.
Xenization: The fact of journeying as a stranger.
Xenodochial: Given to receiving strangers; hospitable.
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one world
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One world, one human race, one spirit…
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What a beautiful poem!
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I know you probably already read it over at Jane’s blog, but I wanted to keep the idea around to “ponder” it some. I knew that about children, too, that for a two or three years they see everything as extensions of themselves. How could the unfolding of the realization your NOT at the center of everyone’s world NOT leave a yearning in your soul for the way it was when you came into the world? I’m enamored with this idea! ❤
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I’ve never really stopped to think about it from that angle. I know when babies are born they are still very connected to Spirit for the first couple of years. There are some amazing stories around about that. Unfortunately kids are then often taught to ‘shut down’. That is the type of soul yearning that I equate it to.
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I think that’s exactly right. This explanation is really growing on me.
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Wonderfully expressed.
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Yes, she is am amazing poet, though her talent goes far beyond that! Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. I know she’ll appreciate it.
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My pleasure
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