Epiphany
“Please don’t put them in there like that,”
I said for the umpteenth time
as you helped me load the dishwasher.
But after so many recitations
of my objections over the years,
all logic for my protests had been lost
in the background noise of our life together.
And you continued to stack the dishes
in the dysfunctional dishwasher
any old way, knowing full well
they wouldn’t get clean.
I straightened up
and looked at you
with new eyes,
for it occurred
to me just then
that our relationship
is much the same.
I tell you what I feel,
what I need,
how I wish it would be for us,
but you don’t hear.
Or, if you do,
you don’t take me seriously.
You go right on relating
as if what I’ve said
holds no significance for you.
Are we on different life-planes
after all these years,
or have I just told you so often
that these words, too,
have lost their meaning?
Well, perhaps it’s finally time
to get a new dishwasher.
I wish our relationship problems
could be as easily remedied.
Perfectly told Calen. I enjoyed this! 🙂
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Thanks, Sam.
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You deliver art…putting on to paper what is most heartfelt.
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Thanks, Umber. I’m getting braver. More able to say my own truth, I guess. But I don’t have the poetic grace you do. Your poem this morning knocked my socks off. You have a real gift for poetry.
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I can understand it can be very difficult, but what you have here I believe is true for most long term relationships.
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As for my poetry I am just learning!
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Yeah, we learned that during a year of counseling…
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I think you speak for so many of us. I sometimes feel that I’m just background noise in out relationship.
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Do you ever wonder if that noise would be missed if you were gone?
I am so sorry I haven’t read that chapter. I’m on it this morning. The last five days have been TOTALLY booked. Been in he car every day and I am so exhausted I will NOT be driving for a few days! That should give me plenty of time to catch up on things. You story is on the top of my pile! You’ve been so patient. Thank you, girlfriend.
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