This is a response to a prompt on A Writer’s Path. Write a scene with a recruiting company for pirates.
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Her long raven hair fell over her shoulders, the ends caught up in the wet cloth she dragged along the bar mopping up the spills and crumbs. It’d been a busy evening. Had taken her forever to shoo everyone out and on their way home. But go they’d had to for there was a meet at midnight on the dot. She loved this tavern, she truly did. It suited her. She was a flirt. She freely admitted it. And every sailor who’d darkened her door was in love with her. It gave her a sense of power. And that was important given what she did.
She hardly looked presentable. The top of her kirtle was soaked with sweat from standing near the hot cook fire all day, her two-layered, pink- and green-striped skirts felt like they weighed as much as a bloody anchor over her graying and worn petticoat. She untied the once-white apron and hung it on a peg behind the bar, then began to undo the leather laces of her bodice. Lord, it felt good to be able to breath again.
“Are ye done out there then?”
He was impatient tonight. The hour was late and they needed to be about their business. She loved that man, though he could be demanding at times. Claimed he was just looking out for her interests.
“Aye, Fergus. Everyone’s gone and the place is practically pitch dark.”
Hearing the bell over the door tinkle, she quickly tied the laces off a bit looser and shoved her hair back over her shoulders. She smelled them before she saw ’em. Gawd! Why can’t men ever take a bath, she thought. Putting on her sweetest smile, she turned to meet the three, rough-looking sailors.
“We heared ye be lookin’ fer more crew.”
The man who’d spoken removed his hat and held it before him waiting. They were all filthy from head to toe. Pictures of each other they were — brown woolen breeches, sweat-stained overshirts. The speaker held his red hat, one wore blue, and one none at all. Their shoes were good though. You could tell a deal from looking at a man’s shoes. This lot wore good, solid boots. Aye, they knew what they were about, all right, she figured. She motioned for them to sit at the bar.
“Where’d you last work,” she asked. She could see them licking their lips, thirsty for a drink of the demon rum. But she was a smart one. She knew what could happen when men got to drinkin’ together. Three against one? She didn’t like them odds. She reckoned she could take them, though. Didn’t get where she was by being soft.
Just then the half door to the kitchen swung open on well-oiled hinges and Fergus shouldered his way through, smoothing his shirt sleeves down over his elbows as he came. His bald head shimmered with beads of sweat, his wiry orange brows and mustache drooped in the humid summer heat. He got straight to the heart of the matter.
“Not from around here, are ye?”
The red-capped one answered for them all. “We’ve been on the Molly B. out of Portloe for 18 moons.”
“The Molly B. sailed day afore yesterday.” Fergus eyes narrowed and he leveled a don’t-you-dare-lie-to-me look at the three. “Get in a bit of trouble on ‘er, did ye?”
The three exchanged glances and grinned, checker-board teeth showing through their lopsided smiles. “Aye, jest a wee bit,” red said, winking at his mates. “We likes the drink a bit too much.”
Fergus rolled his eyes and looked her way. She gave the barest shrug of her shoulders and slipped through the door into the kitchen. Gonna be a short discussion, she thought. Best leave them to it.
Fergus fixed them again with that evil-eyed stare. “I brook no shenanigans aboard the Sea Jade, boys. I’ve keel-hauled my fair share of bloody sea dogs like you. I’d like as not send ye on yer way ‘cept we sail tonight. Fast. Hit our mark, and get the bloody hell back home.” Fergus leaned his muscled arms on the bar and waited.
The three eyed those muscles for a time, then blue asked, “What’s the job then, eh?”
“Och! It speaks!” Fergus spit, raising his bushy brows. “Well then, there be a payload of coin and a shipment of wine leaving St. Just-in-Penwith tonight. We plan to do the deed soon after they set sail and be back afore the sun rises. We split the spoils equal. Each man gets ‘is fair share. What say ye, then? Do we have a deal?”
“Sounds fair to me,” said the bareheaded sailor running his hand anxiously through his curly chestnut locks.
Fergus slammed his hands down flat on the table. All three men jumped. “Good! The Sea Jade is moored in Mount’s Bay just around the cape. Tell Albie that Fergus sent ye. Stow yer gear aboard and make yerselfs useful. We’ll be right at yer heels.”
“Hold on, there,” red said, forehead wrinkled with an unspoken question. “How many men be in this crew? To share the bounty I means.”
“Eight men and one woman.”
All three men grew wide-eyed. “A woman! Och, ’tis bad luck to have a woman aboard a pirate ship. Dinna yer cap’ain know that, man?”
“Well I dinna know,” Fergus said as the kitchen door swung back open. “What say ye, Cap’ain?”
Grinning she tucked in Fergus’s old shirt, hitched up her britches, sat a floppy-brimmed hat fixed with a white feather on her head and gave them a wink. “Ain’t been a problem so far…”
From one Captain to another, aye aye. Loved reading this!
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😀 It was fun. I swear I was a pirate wench in a previous life! (Fun to imagine that anyway.) Thanks for stopping by.
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Yup…baddass pirates! Gotta love that. I see what you mean. Pirates, Ahoy! And, very nicely done. Did not see that coming…but love it. And I read above you have many beginnings, few middles and ends. I…have titles, oodles of titles, and now beginning or stories at all.
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make that “NO” not “now” …no stories
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😀 I understood. I’m beginning to speak Badfishian. I can speak Fimnorian, too. Though I have some trouble still with Platorian… He’s a bit too deep for me at times! Glad you liked the story starter.
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Well…you’re way ahead of me, I barely speak English. And Fim is spooky. Haven’t spent much time with Plato…maybe I should run over there for peak (and see if he’s wearing an eye patch while I’m at it)…
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He doesn’t need an eye patch to be intimidating. He’s 6’5″ tall! I probably come up to his belly button.
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Well, OK, but let’s put a parrot on his shoulder, at least?
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Ok, I’ll talk to him about the parrot. What color would you like? 😀
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All colors…it’s a parrot
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Ok, no parrot, eye patch, or pirate, but he says he’d like to have a beer with you some night.
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Bad Party on!
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WOOHOO GF! You got featured by Ryan Lanz!
http://ryanlanz.com/2015/04/24/writing-prompt-highlight-what-say-ye/
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Thanks for letting me know Colls. I was totally oblivious here. That’s really nice. Now We’re Pirate bookends. 😀
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Thanks for the boost, Ryan. Appreciate it muchly.
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I figured out with some help how to share other peoples stuff on my blog. I posted it on the groove. Would you look and make sure I did it right please.
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Yep, be right there.
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Gotta love her, don’t you? Thanks for the song, dude.
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Btw, how the heck did you get that YouTube video in a comment? I need to know how to do that!
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There is a thing called “press this” I got somewhere that allows you to cut and paste stuff from anywhere. I finally got some clarity that I hosted my blog on bluehost which made me a private hosted blog or something blah blah blah apparently there is some benefit to that but it also cuts one out of some other stuff. But to answer your question i just went to Youtube pulled up the song and copied it into the comment. it came up. I’m so clever 🙂 I just wanted you to hear the song
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Hot dog! I gotta try that. Thanks!
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Love the pirate talk. Don’t know how to do that at all.
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One of those guys has to be her father or know where her lover is. Maybe you can finish the story of the song “Brandy” who tried to steal a sailor for the sea. She’s a fine girl. What a good wife she would be. . . .
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LOL One of my favorite songs. Brandy was my first ever “name” on the internet.
Actually I’m always joking with everyone that I was a tavern wench in a a previous life who moonlighted as a pirate. In truth, I think the COOLEST THING IN THE WORLD would be to own an Irish-Italian Bar.
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I want the rest of it you big tease. You gonna keep writing right?
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Well you see, you’ve stumbled on my problem. I have lots of story beginnings, but no middles and endings. Just can’t seem to get there. With the exception of Glencara’s Bane which I wrote in 30 days during the NaNoWriMo challenge in 2013 (and I’m still trying to edit after feedback from my beta readers — I dislike my protagonist, can’t figure her out at all), I’ve never finished a fiction piece in my life. I seem to be stuck in the real world. It’s disappointing to me because I would love to create my own world. But I’ll keep workin’ at it…
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But she is not a bar wench. She is just doing what she has to do dealing with the mundane day to day. Trying to be realistic and safe behind her tough dependable exterior. This chance meeting will open her up and she will gradually allow herself to believe again. she will go find the man who gave her the neckless and and took her with him every time he left the harbor. She wont admit it to herself that is what she is doing but every decision turns her toward him. He married the sea cause he did not know how to trust the shore. Like the guy in my story he needs her and dont even know it. She is tough but she is so tired of being that way. she just wants to melt and be safe. Be herself Brandy.. or not, just thinking out loud. But if you don’t do it the universe will never have whats in you.
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Now see there! You’ve got it all worked out already. YOU should be the one writing that story. LOL
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No! Its your story. I was just thinking out loud. I dont have your words. I cant write a pirate story. I dont have the pirate words. I would be happy to collaborate but your heart knows how it should go. Its your story. Not just something in your head. Your story. I saw it in the first chapter.
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